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eyes of owls and north wind echos |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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spin spun hindering rafters without the sky left to preach to and night is often her own driver in a black pumpkin's pungent as we drink from her cornucopia the undulated amber of lava oh earth we love your belly when it growls invitations and when your lady like is broken like the fragile metal wings of chain sawed tin commandments when upheaval is in her snug gown assundered with jagged silk and a bodice made from shadows that the circling ravens prowl yes you are the stone man's messiah we wear your crosses as our gypsies _____________ daark scribblenote: down hiway 46 from where james dean folded his life to an end..during a storm in early morning when the earth was changing her sheets into some new day flattery |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Is that little coffee shop still at the crossed road? I sat over in the seat toward the corner... talking of a time long ago... Enjoyed the owl sounds... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun..it is there, changed names a few times I think.. or maybe ms earth just moved it from some other little nowhere location, thanks for the eyes ms [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (11-17-2005 08:19 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
we wear your crosses as our gypsies.... that and all the others were just really good DS...you amaze me.... and bring me to a quiet place....of great imagry...that highway of yours certainly has a tender loving voice. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms lee j..you are a flower beside that highway my friend, thank you |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dark~ Sometimes ... you pen a remarkable render of a time remembered~ This is one of those times, I believe~ 'when your lady like is broken like the fragile metal wings of chain sawed tin commandments when upheaval is in her snug gown assundered with jagged silk and a bodice made from shadows that the circling ravens prowl yes you are the stone man's messiah' "when your lady like is broken" ... *sighing* with the sheer imagery of this~ Me likeum~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))>< Email - noles1@totcon.com |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
ditto what everyone else has said.. *smile* you are very unique... "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms marge, bless you lady friend, and thanks.. ________ susan..you make me smile..am pleased to be that way in your eyes |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Your words would make mother earth proud of herself. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie.. thanks lil neighbor you smile me |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very very cool write  |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Dark Stranger, I am thankful for the scribblenote (and I really enjoy this word of yours), without which I may have meandered into more paths that weren't there! I loved your depiction of the storm. My favourite part was: oh earth we love your belly when it growls invitations - Owl |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Just awesome!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea, thank you for the whispers here ______________ friendly owl, thank you for your eyes and for putting up with my special world _______________ ms nine, thank you for moments when you smile |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
you are special My spirit will rise |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
You always have a unique way of describing the world and feelings surrounding you. |
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