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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2005-11-17 05:12 AM


Tapestry quilt of autumn, vibrant,
covering us in love embrace
with golden paper leaves,
smothering us in our dream.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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A Romantic Heart
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1 posted 2005-11-17 05:32 AM


~A Beautiful Dream it is

My favorite line "Golden Paper Leaves"

~ARH

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2 posted 2005-11-17 06:59 PM



"Tapestry quilt of autumn, vibrant,
covering us in love embrace
with golden paper leaves,
smothering us in our dream."



EA

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3 posted 2005-11-19 01:37 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo precious, sweet friend, may your love always blanket you with warmth like the golden leaves blanket the earth in autumn, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

exhale
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4 posted 2005-11-20 06:09 PM


this is beautiful,
but i love that you used the word 'smothering'
it just added something to it
that was bittersweet.

[This message has been edited by exhale (11-20-2005 07:50 PM).]

pictureme2
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5 posted 2005-11-20 10:46 PM


beautiful write. Thanks for sharing the beauty of smothering!
pictureme2

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