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lucky
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0 posted 2005-11-16 09:02 PM


     This was actually written in response to a comment that Martie's had made a while back. As I recall, she said something like: “I don’t know how you and Rosemary do it. . . .” The question is not “How” but “Why” we do it. Hopefully this will answer in a small way the "why" we love this life so much. The farm is almost self sufficient, but as everyone knows there are times when you have to go to town and get these little things called necessities. Toilet tissue doesn't grow on trees ha! ha! But really, you wouldn't believe what it takes to get us motivated to to town. We just plain folk and the city is just to......I guess that should cover it.



just another journey




imagine the nighttime roof
lines ravished with icicle trinkets
or a snowy fir every inch a twinkle
ensconced with nuanced flakes
cedars ribboned and woven
into a velveteen
tapestry



and just over yonder
streaming down ravines hem
a fringed chenille along wrinkled
brook of twinkling sequins wave
in rivulets of ruffled beavers



whimsy imagine
uncovering
moods
all
quilted
with treasures
by the just wandering
down of an old forgotten skid



the experience of being greeted by a moose
on a daily stroll in early dawn where you’re sure
to hear a daunted fawn who’s serene now dazed
upon is not exactly in the frame for colloquy
her stay you see was for graze but now
is tainted by the solitary sashay of
the unthinkable scrunch which
of course has disturbed
serenity’s mood



unbelievably though ‘tis stolen
just as quickly by vigilant squirrels eye who
has trumpeted your advent to all her friends who
are now scampering to capture at least a kernel
from your pocket full of cat food so graciously
brought for them then of course onward
to retrieve the world’s worst junk
from where it was
dropped

yep
that’s
your mailbox




Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again...
~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~


© Copyright 2005 Dale W. Gwaltney - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2005-11-16 10:20 PM


Dale...the photos...oh the photos!!  So precious to see and hear how it is...I do myself run into a peacock or two and squirrels have finally found there way home to our telephone wires...and even a bear was at our trash the other night, but no moose as yet...I await the delight...but then I'm in the wrong place for such, or am I?  
pictureme2
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2 posted 2005-11-16 10:48 PM


loved walking on this journey with you. The photos speak with the words!
Nicely done!
pictureme2

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2005-11-17 11:20 AM


Dale !!!
This is WONDERFUL !!!

If I become a 'hermit-by-choice' when I grow up ... I'm putting a rocker on that porch !

Awesome photos ... with lovely inking~

Hi Rosemary~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email -   noles1@totcon.com   

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Canada eh.
4 posted 2005-11-17 11:27 AM


Oh my...this is outstanding!!
What I would give to live at such a place..
The pictures compliment your words perfectly!
Wonderful wonderful write.
Hugs~Nancy

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2005-12-06 11:34 AM



~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email -       noles1@totcon.com       

bgj
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since 2005-11-09
Posts 128
Ga. USA
6 posted 2005-12-06 01:40 PM


From one country boy to another, great write. Enjoyed it very much. Great pictures too. Peace,
bgj

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