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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2005-11-16 01:50 PM


(Here's a re-post from nearly five years ago shortly after joining this site, which I always get emotional and cry re-reading it, especially now, as five years have went by and I have made barely any progress to find my dream girl and have wanted her for so long.

I guess I just feel lost in the wilderness of life, and just don't know where to look, and I don't feel as though I can bear waiting another length of time like this. I just want to feel the light in her eyes ever soooooooo much. )


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Our Hearts Had Touched
By: Noah Eaton
1/31/01

I sat beneath the summer stars with her atop the mountains,
overlooking the lush green foothills,
under the diamond dust conifers and maple honey aspens,
rainbow morpho butterflies and hummingbirds fluttering about merrily,
she lightly laid her head on my shoulder,
and I had my hand out around her shoulder,
gently touching her,
stargazing, talking to each other as dear friends,
as the stars blinked with a bright light,
that magic was about to happen.

She said how ever since she was young,
she picked a star in the sky as her own star,
and she made a special wish,
and that she kept it true up until now,
and then she began to tell me how lonely and scared she was before,
and how she always wanted to be loved.
beginning to cry in her thoughts of her memories,
she holds me close,
resting her head on my chest,
telling me of the pain she went through,
as I caress the back of her neck gently with my hand,
telling her everything is okay,
and it’s all over now.

She raises her head up,
and wipes her tears,
as she tries to stop crying,
and I turn to face her,
looking into her sad but beautiful starry eyes,
crying, feeling her emotions,
I lean in to kiss her,
softly touching her lips,
and gently separate.
I tell her,
that I had been through all that pain before too,
and I had longed to find true happiness and love myself,
remembering the remnants of my sad early years,
tears slide down my cheeks,
as I sympathize my feelings with hers.

Her eyes slowly burst in tears,
as she gently touched my face with her fingers,
and she tells me how sad it must had been,
for she had been there too,
and we look into each others eyes,
silkened in affection,
and she gently lays her hands on my shoulders.
and kisses me,
between each sweet soft embrace,
she whispers
"Please don’t cry, I’m here for you!"
and I tell her, "I’ll always be there for you too!"

I look into her eyes again,
and slowly a smile begins to shine on her face,
tears of sadness becoming tears of happiness.
I smile looking at her sweet soft face,
and together we cry,
and we hold each other,
our heads over each others shoulders,
we tell each other how happy we make each other feel,
as the stars begin to radiate like we had never seen before,
we look up and watch them flash all different colors,
melting with pearl drop light,
and we tell each other...
"I love you!"

We look into each others eyes again
and the light falls to the soft grass,
light surrounding us,
and we could see through each others hearts,
we both saw the dream lover in each others heart,
as dreams floated about in the mountain skies,
and the aspens golden leaves shined like the sun,
melting into honey,
dripping to the ground,
angels of the forests flying about,
wearing the many flowers of nature,
the whole mountains lighting up in romantic starlight,
and we widely smile in cheer,
knowing we were meant for each other,
and our loves quests were complete.

I tell her that she is the girl of my dreams,
as she tells me I am her dream love,
we cry in perfect happiness,
as we hold each other close,
watching the magic of the night fall upon us,
we embrace each others lips,
kissing each other,
as I lay her on the soft sweet alpine grass,
her hands tied around the back of my neck,
she tells me,
"Oh love, please be mine forever, let me have you!"
I smile looking at her angelic face,
under the stars,
and I say,
"I will never let you go, my love, I’ll always be yours!"

She pulls me down to her,
and kisses me again and again,
our lips locked in loves magic,
speaking sweet words to each other
between every sweet kiss,
sighing in breathless beauty.
I burst in tears again,
comfortably knowing,
that me and my true loves hearts had touched finally,
and we had found true love to share,
forever...


"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

© Copyright 2005 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-11-16 02:04 PM


lil buddie, if I can just say one thing..

in your own time, when time is right for you,
you will.     how could someone as special as you not dear boy??  

dreams are a wonderful thing, hang on to yours sweetie....

hugs and PEACE to you Noah, our angel of these blue pages.  

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2 posted 2005-11-16 02:12 PM


I'm telling you Noah...one day soon..
you're going to make a gal swoon..
and she will be THE one for you!
Heart hugs~Nancy

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

LeeJ
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3 posted 2005-11-16 02:22 PM


this was your other half's true life portrait...drawn by the heart of her very special poet....

wonderful writing

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4 posted 2005-11-16 02:45 PM


"we both saw the dream lover in each others heart,
as dreams floated about in the mountain skies,
and the aspens golden leaves shined like the sun,
melting into honey,
dripping to the ground,
angels of the forests flying about,
wearing the many flowers of nature,
the whole mountains lighting up in romantic starlight,
and we widely smile in cheer,
knowing we were meant for each other,
and our loves quests were complete."

~ Dear, sweet Noah, you have touched my romantic soul with your writing. This is one of my favourites of your love poems.


It's curious that, often in life, that for which we seek, appears when we stopped searching for it. When you least expect she will appear. I know this to be true!

What a writer! What a loving soul! I want you to have the happiness that you deserve! ~ and whomever may come into your life, I hope that she is deserving of such love and loves you as well in return.

Loving hug,
Linda


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5 posted 2005-11-16 02:52 PM


Noah, you are just the dearest young man ever! Someone special is looking for you as much as you are searching for her.

hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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6 posted 2005-11-16 11:06 PM


Noah, Noah, Noah,
this made me want to reach out and hug ya! :-) You know her and she knows you, you just have to meet! Keep dreaming and someday you'll be dreaming awake.
thanks for the read.
pictureme2

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