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bgj
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0 posted 2005-11-16 11:32 AM



              God’s Art

I see the mist from the water rise
As the fire falls from the sky,
The mountains stand so wise and proud
Reaching forever into the clouds.

I love the feel of the morning breeze
As it blows so crisply through the trees,
The sound of the brook on it’s twisting path
Brings joy to my heart and makes it laugh.

I watch the squirrels scamper away
In their joyful, happy way,
High in the trees they cavort and dance
Ever taking a lofty chance.

I sit by the brook and look away
To a nearby hill where children play,
Their laughter fills the morning air
As they run and jump without a care.

It's the greatest work of art you see
And it always sets my spirit free,
As I see God's canvas spread this way
I think what a wonderful, beautiful day.

           Bobby G. Jarrard

Copyright 2005 by Bobby G. Jarrard



© Copyright 2005 Bobby G. Jarrard - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2005-11-16 11:33 AM


beautiful write Bobby!!  lovely
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2 posted 2005-11-16 11:45 AM



Poetry Divine! I was smiling while I  reading your lovely poem from beginning to end.

Love & God's Light,
EA

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3 posted 2005-11-16 11:53 AM


Bobby~

'It's the greatest work of art you see
And it always sets my spirit free,'


This is as lovely as can be ...
Welcome to our poetic circle~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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4 posted 2005-11-16 01:44 PM


This is SO beautifully written..
I'm sending it straight to my library.
Hugs~Nancy

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

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5 posted 2005-11-16 10:49 PM


Very nicely written, such tranquility and
peace that the reader can certainly enjoy.

ice
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6 posted 2005-11-17 06:46 AM


Bobby
"It's the greatest work of art you see
And it always sets my spirit free,
As I see God's canvas spread this way
I think what a wonderful, beautiful day."

A beautiful mantra that sould be repeated each morning when we rise...

Enjoyed the whole poem..

-----------ice
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bgj
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7 posted 2005-11-17 10:11 PM


Thanks everyone for your kind words. Peace to all,
bgj

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