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MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

0 posted 2005-11-15 01:35 PM




I survived you
as I survived everything else
as I survived the earthquake on the other side of the world
the fallen leaves of autumn
all the miseries untold

I survived you
As I survived the past century
Of hushed memories

The coming days of secrets yearning
Of all that is not spoken ..
Yet

I survived you
As I survived the dawn
Of parting
The sunset of meeting again

As I survived the tide
That relinquished itself upon my shore

The mourning moon
That hid itself in your sleeve
& I was left with a moonless sky
For decades to come

But I survived it
As I survived you
And what could there be
To live through
And through
If I survived you
Wholly
But never true




"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2005-11-15 02:07 PM


HiSweetLady~

'The coming days of secrets yearning
Of all that is not spoken ..
Yet'


Love this ... the wistful thoughts of hope springing anew~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2005-11-15 06:06 PM


Wow, My Melody...  this one is potent, self-aware, and bold in a way that holds true to your form and style, yet displays a new facet to behold...  and be held...  Well done and namasté, for honorable it is...

-MVS

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MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
3 posted 2005-11-16 05:14 AM



Marge..
If only hope could ever spring anew

I'm glad you loved it dearest..

---------------------


"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of

MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
4 posted 2005-11-16 05:17 AM




Mark..

A new facet to be hold..
I wonder what could it be?

Your feedback is always treasured my friend.

PS. did u get my email?

Thank you

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2005-11-16 11:26 AM


This is absolutely lovely!  Very well done.
BluesSerenade
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6 posted 2005-11-16 09:19 PM


I survived you
As I survived the dawn
Of parting
The sunset of meeting again

As I survived the tide
That relinquished itself upon my shore

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Very nice writing MyEnchanted_Melody~
This reads like a diamond in the rough...
and so beautifully polished.

~thanks for this gem~

Enchantress
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7 posted 2005-11-16 10:21 PM


Perfectly beautiful and much enjoyed!
Hugs~Nancy

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

pictureme2
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8 posted 2005-11-16 10:44 PM


I enjoyed this one and the last stanza is and ending stanza perfect!
pictureme2

MyEnchanted_Melody
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9 posted 2005-11-18 07:04 AM



Gentle spirit

Thank you dearly..


MyEnchanted_Melody
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10 posted 2005-11-18 07:53 AM



BluesSerenade

A diamond...!
That's a big compliemen, I must admit..Thank you dearly
...............................

Enchantress

I'm glad you enjoyed it.
......................................
pictureme2
Thank you dearly for taking the time to read it


"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of

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