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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Your Gaze It seems to level like the sea when neither sun nor gale warnings lay in the offing. Rarely does balance appear so sensual as on those days when, blue deprived, the ocean stares, calming. RMW |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ and I feel as though I am sailing on tranquil seas with your calming words.   EA |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bob...when the ocean is calm and reflective, it indeed feels like your poem. Lovely! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
I like this, Bob, it's hard to describe, but you've captured both the quiet and the strength of a being and the sea. Hope all is well! Corinne |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Ladies ..... thank you kindly. Bob |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Rarely does balance appear so sensual" love that line!  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" ~Unknown~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
~This is perfectly beautiful~ Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
as on those days when, blue deprived, the ocean stares, calming. ~*~ Bob, that's when the ocean sparkles in green... |
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