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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-11-14 10:07 AM


I’ve Come

I’ve come to envy days of yore
The pounding of the waves on shore
The wet that sinks within the sand
The warmth that comes from touch of hand

I’ve come to hate the cut and scull
The times that turns my mind to dull
The loss of fantasies reward
The limit of my smorgasbord

It feels as if a veil has formed
And shadows where the light once swarmed
Tilting toward the dark of night
With fewer stars that shine at sight

Much too much for shadows rind
They must be shadows of my mind
But yet they skitter and they bark
The green has gone from light to dark

I’ve come to envy days of yore
But wish no more the evermore


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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2005-11-14 10:41 AM


Oh, my! Between yours and Marge's titles today, I best get me to a nunnery! My halo is slipping past the point of no return!

But, alas, my friend, on reading your sad poem, 'tis not a laughing matter.

Just know, that I understand such feelings, but as you also know, they do pass. May the sun be even brighter for you on the morrow!

Sun 3

Giving you a big, warm, loving hug ~ and a tickle under your chin! ~ or behind your ear, whichever you'd prefer!

Here is a Morning Glory that I have picked from beyond's Heaven's Gate, for you! Flowers

EA

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2005-11-14 10:43 AM


Seymour~
As usual, you've come full word-circle ... drawing me into the days of your sparkling mind of remind~

Monday morning *Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

scorpio
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right...there
3 posted 2005-11-14 11:10 AM


We've come...to expect a smorgasbord of ideas, emotionals and images from you sy.  You never disappoint.  Well done.

believe in what your heart feels...

Constance
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4 posted 2005-11-14 01:42 PM


Seymour,

Wonderful capture of feeling here!  When we're young, we resent and strain against limits only to find that later in life there are different limits to resent and strain against---------how very well you put it!

unlimited smiles,
Constance


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