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Open Poetry #36

Autumnal Savagery

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2005-11-13 12:02 PM

I despair not at your brutal rape and dismemberment
As the icy blades slash and rip apart your pretty clothes
Revealing the bones of your soul, barren now waiting rebirth

I do not care as your bits of once living lies in death at my feet
Now moved to the corner cairns to slowly decompose
Kept captive by naked thorns of an unfulfilled beauty

The statue of abandoned bones shivers with forced movement,
Waiting spiritless throughout the coming time when nothing grows,
A tombstone of the year gone where dieing is solemn duty.

Gloom

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-11-13 12:25 PM

this is excellent!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2005-11-13 01:02 PM

You are living up to your name

especially like "Kept captive by naked thorns of an unfulfilled beauty"

M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (11-13-2005 02:05 PM).]

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

3 posted 2005-11-13 03:24 PM

As leaves fell
They left a note
We’ll save a place
For you

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

4 posted 2005-11-14 07:36 AM

Thank you for your comments

Gloom

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2005-11-14 11:06 AM

Gloomy, this was outstanding! One of my favorites from you...and there are a lot!

*click*

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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