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Three Words, Three Wishes
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Three Words, Three Wishes |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Three Words, Three Wishes Petal by petal, in the pull of deep fall Once delicate wings flutter not, not at all Pink, softly scents quick awakening in Moments blushed cover modestly tender new skin The pale moon of winter calmly waits for the frost Counting silver as bounty for a summer now lost Bringing closer a fire in repeal of dismay In reverse of discomfort rhyming withers away Yet her hand to his heart the augment of a sigh Warm beneath humming oils this inaudible cry To be heard in a touch speaking solely to soul And restored shards of crystal into wishes three fold Of two planes came together looking down in her eyes From the sky and the water moved the earth in surprise Lasting long into seasons, and much to her delight Came the answers to questions held close in the night Copyright Kkh 11/12/05 |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
two planes came together . . . From the sky and the water moved the earth in surprise |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
How do you do it? You create the most lovely images rapped in beautiful meter and rhyme. Simply wonderful, my friend! Patricia |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, she most certainly does, doesn't she? Well done Kathy!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 absolutely gorgeous! love the rhyme and the imagery, agreeing with Patricia here...you rock! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
TD, So glad I stopped in! Your words are so masterfully written with color, rythym, alliteration, assonance, etc. Some day I hope to feel the texture of the pages your words fall upon! miscellanea |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Just had to come back and file it in the big room. Thanks for the pleasant melody. misce |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent piece of work here Kathleen. So very much enjoyed reading you, as always. Hugs~Nancy Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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pictureme2 Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 194 |
An enjoyable read from the start to the finish....beeautiful! |
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