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ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state

0 posted 2005-11-12 10:44 PM


A vision with eyes closed
Mind channels
opened a crack
Broadband interference
something about someone else


fast forward this
self  in advance mode
another part of body lives
affected recall
discovered  hidden  paths
but the future is there
plotted
chartered

Destiny says nothing is unknown
visions clouded
opened a crack
somebody says they can see
without sight
fast forward to another space
other times
predicted recall.

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (11-13-2005 11:19 AM).]

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Huan Yi
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Waukegan
1 posted 2005-11-13 08:12 AM



When their guru fell
In the swimming pool
Failing to walk on water

His devoted thought
At last it best
To use their brains for answers


Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2005-11-13 08:23 PM


Some interesting thoughts here, Martin.
I prefer a destiny that offers a dynamic ever-changing sketchbook, as opposed to one which is already inscribed with indelible inks.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2005-11-13 08:27 PM


Excellent write Martin..
Much enjoyed the thoughts here.
Hugs~Nancy

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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Michigan
4 posted 2005-12-21 11:12 PM


Excellent read.

:-)

ecrivan
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my own state
5 posted 2005-12-24 01:42 AM


Is there a mysteriuos power that guides us into thinking one way or another...


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