As i watch you i can't think of anything more beautiful then death

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Open Poetry #36

As i watch you i can't think of anything more beautiful then death

greco
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since 2003-09-27

Posts 85
buffalo ny

0 posted 2005-11-12 05:01 PM

Ok well i wasthinking about different ways to write poetry and i have never written one in a letter form so here it is..and dont worry death is about the trees and fall and everything like that. Almost a Ricky Fitz day today i guess. Thanks let me know what you think

Red Crested One,
Why does thee play on something so barren and dreadful?

Red Crested One,
How does thee have not a concern or apprehension in this image of life?

Oh Red Crested One,
Please grant me your knowledge and the way one
Can play with something so dead and make it seem alive
Like this image of life we live in.
Is your world truly different then mine?
Thank You

P.S. If you have time, would you teach me how to fly into the sunset as you do?

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

1 posted 2005-11-12 06:02 PM

We all in some shape variety or otherwise wirte our ideas, thoughts and a lot else which people often assume must be personal.

Talent's there

Enjoy it

Bodger

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2005-11-12 06:38 PM

I talk to'em too, the feathered ones, ask them similar Q's.
I enjoyed this flight write.

greco
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 85
buffalo ny

3 posted 2005-11-12 06:56 PM

they are fun to watch thanks.

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