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Steam Driven Submarine
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Steam Driven Submarine |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
This comes from something that was real and still is, albeit forgotten probably by now unless Blair went back to Scotland and they would have him, and that is the living ones as apposed to the disasters. Bodger Rain was fine as we spent our time in Scotland by a loch Once a year a gathering To honour those lost Funeral in those days Just gather by the trees Those lost were gathered In a steam driven submarine Officer and anyone With ceremonial rifles Came to the present And with history there Adopted the same stance As a Steam driven submarine And raised their rifles in salute Straight into the trees |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Officer and anyone With ceremonial rifles Came to the present Those lines are very powerful.. good job |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Bodger... Thank you... the visuals were seen... the power, felt...  . |
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