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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-11-12 09:38 AM


Casting Shadows

Shadows cast upon a wall
A wet stone for desires fall
With actions sweep from side to side
To sharpen it, to cut abide

I’ve cleaved the blade into believe
And cut the stitching of conceive
Poked and prod within the core
But never found forevermore

It’s still to be or not to be
That lingers me upon the sea
In search an Island with a shoal
To rest the weary of my soul

And there perhaps a candidate
To share with me my human fate
To occupy this veil of sky
To eat with me this humble pie

I’ve searched the in and out of light
Those rainbow trails that fill my night


© Copyright 2005 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2005-11-12 09:46 AM


Look to the rainbow Sy..
and you shall find your forevermore.  
Morning and hope you have a great weekend..
You just started mine with a smile.
& , Nancy


Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

scorpio
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2 posted 2005-11-12 09:54 AM


Much enjoyed this morning's write Sy...especially the last stanza!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2005-11-12 09:55 AM


Mr. T. ~

Ye be a poet and man of great stature ~ and ye cast a long shadow.


EA
P.S. I'd be honoured to sample a slice of humble pie with thee ~ beneath a shimmering rainbow. Pie  Rainbow

aujussy wolf
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4 posted 2005-11-12 01:08 PM


Tabs .... i felt this
to the bottom of my soul searching
a great write sir
~wolf

serenity blaze
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5 posted 2005-11-12 03:41 PM


Hey there babydoll.

(hmmm...I think a seymour doll would sell, too. )

I really love this one sy-sweetie--I find it relaxing to sharpen knives.

Have I ever thanked you just for being? Probably, but I'll risk boring you by thanking you again.

You are a sweet treat for us all!

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2005-11-12 05:49 PM


In search an Island ...
To rest the weary of my soul


when you find it Sy, let me  know~~


M

MARK V SHELDON
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7 posted 2005-11-12 11:03 PM


Seymour, you're always the first poet for whom I look after my long departures from PIP, and you never let me down with your art because classic never goes out of style...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2005-11-12 11:46 PM


Enchantress
Thank you dear.

scorpio
Thank you my friend.

Earth Angel
Your comments are always a pleasure to read.

aujussy wolf
Your comment was a delight to read.

serenity
I knew you would pick up on the knives. LOL


Maureen
I cetainly will, thank you.

MARK
Missed you and thank you my friend.

Sunshine
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9 posted 2005-11-13 08:26 AM



For you, my friend...





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Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2005-11-13 09:08 AM


Seymour~
Always ... always a delightful read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2005-11-13 09:09 AM


Sunshine
Excellent,

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2005-11-13 09:55 AM


Marge  
Sorry Marge you slipped inbetween my write to Sunshine.

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