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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-11-11 09:18 PM



It was a strange day that day
We just felt things vibrate through us that didn't seem to have been there 10 minutes ago
It was a stormy day rain hitting rain as it forced itself to get through the rain with the wind swirling up like a canopy

We watched and held by a jeweller's shop metal was down, we weren't lost unless in evocation we desired revocation and one more final dice set to toss

We watched into the sun, all reservations done in daylight we glowed

Apart

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state of mind
1 posted 2005-11-12 10:54 AM


enjoyed
bernie

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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
2 posted 2005-11-12 12:49 PM


Thanks Bernie

Dave

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