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Ghost New Member
since 2005-11-10
Posts 2 |
When you make peace with authority you become authority said the lizzard king now snakes everywhere bite their eggs alive And if for some reason the gathering will hold you back take hide in the lines below Mystic indians and threeworks all immaculate, together |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (big angel hugs) Wow, this is a poignant and powerful debut, sweet friend, the main challenge is how peaceful the authority is themselves that determine if this peace or stability will last, which is indeed the great challenge for us all, yay, I love this, welcome to Passions! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ghost, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Welcome to Pip! I look forward to more of your work. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Ghost New Member
since 2005-11-10
Posts 2 |
Tank you, Angel and Susan. There's a reference here to Jim Morrison (the lizzard King) - I tried to expand on that theme. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I didn't get the lizzard part so thanks for letting us know what that was about.  Welcome to Pip! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
There is more than a reference here..especially with the indian section..and maybe stoned immaculate...but this is no bad thing..have you studied Rimbaud?...enjoyed..welcome to pip... Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please, check your email for a Special Greeting! "There's a reason they call God The Creator - he sides with talent." Julia Cameron |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Gottcha...and welcome, welcome, looking sooo foreward to more of your wise words and musings. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Welcome to PIP Bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Interesting poem...being from the 'hippie' generation, I see that most of my peers have 'become' what they fought against! Welcome to the family...I look forward to reading more from you. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
ahhh "the lizard king" , "i can do anything" the ghost song also comes to mind ~ "awake" "shake dreams from your hair my pretty child my sweet one ""choose your day the sign of the day the days divinity""the first thing you see" -j.morrison -(may he rest in peace ) liked the flashback i got from your poem peace~wolf |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi! Welcome to piptalk.com! You posted an interestingly unique poem for your debut on these pages of blue! Warm, welcoming hug, Earth Angel P.S. Are you really a GHOST?!?  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Welcome to Passions, much enjoyed your first post. ah yes, Jim Morrison. I didnt make the connection until your explanation. Well done! |
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