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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-11-10 07:02 AM


Once More

Once more I pass realities door
To sip a cup of fantasies store
Drink the magic’s intoxicate
Before the end and it’s too late

It’s not that I have gone to sleep
But leap dimensions with my sweep
Walking through my fantasy
Portioning off each ecstasy

Imbibing wile and even dream
Sanctifies each state of seem
Rubbing lotion deep inside
Fills my soul with it’s abide

It is to me antithesis
The essence of my voice and hiss
It is my world of true relieve
It is the world that I believe

So pass me, if my lids fall close
Or sit you down and smell the rose


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1 posted 2005-11-10 08:54 AM


So pass me, if my lids fall close
Or sit you down and smell the rose

Seymour, I think I shall sit quietly smelling the roses. I want to hear all about the marvelous things you have seen while dreaming. Much enjoyed this.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2005-11-10 09:04 AM


Good morning, Mr. T.!

May all your Eden fantasies become your reality! Flowers

Another fine poem from your pen!

Love & Light,
EA


Enchantress
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3 posted 2005-11-10 09:17 AM


Ah Sy, you do dream such wonderful dreams..
Have a fantastic day.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

iliana
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4 posted 2005-11-11 11:57 PM


Never heard a hiss from you yet, Sy, lol!  I like that ending.  For some strange reason, the Bok Tower in your wonderful Florida came to my mind when I read that last line.  When I was a teen, my family took a trip and this was a place we experienced.  I still remember a sign posted on a path quoting Bok with something like, Make the world a better place for you having been in it....probably not the exact quote, but that was the idea.  Your poem made me think of that.   ....jo
http://www.boksanctuary.org/index.html (for those who've never heard of it)

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