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Huan Yi
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0 posted 11-09-2005 03:48 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


Amid the long grasses
Of a summer meadow

In a park
Beneath peach blossoms

She still moves
As I would have her

However—the truth
Might be

© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 11-09-2005 04:01 PM       View Profile for Kethry   Email Kethry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kethry

Is this a memory of a loved one lost. It sure reads like it. However it has some wonderful images. Good job.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown


1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace


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oops sorry...giggle
1slick_lady
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i have to go be a deputy now (night shift) when i get in in the morning look for.... " Livingston"
Drauntz
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4 posted 04-21-2007 02:20 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

"In a park
Beneath peach blossoms"
you must know that a world in a prose written by Tao Yun Ming as his dreaming, non-existing world. this prose to Chinese is like Bergerking to American.
Earl Brinkman
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5 posted 06-24-2010 07:19 AM       View Profile for Earl Brinkman   Email Earl Brinkman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Brinkman

You seem to have an understanding of Eastern thought.  Nice.
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