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Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29
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Portland, OR

0 posted 2005-11-09 08:44 AM


You, the central figure of my life.

You, who drives me insane with your mere presents,.

You, whom I cherish and will never let go.

You, who has a lot to learn about me,

You, who has no time to see.

You, who cares for me like no other,

You, who would do anything for me.

You, the only thing keeping me together.

You, whom I hardly see,

You, who I wish were here with me,

You, who causes me more trouble then all,

You, whom I cannot let in, afraid to fall.

You, the man I…

You, who made me lose my confidence,

You, who does not know.

You, with your big brown eyes full of life,

You, with your sweet compliments and innocence,

You, with a tongue that cuts not at will,

You, who broke me,

You… you saved me too.

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-11-09 09:27 AM


a great big hug for this one, beautifully written and expressed....
lilyelapink
New Member
since 2005-11-09
Posts 8
UK
2 posted 2005-11-09 03:48 PM


Kristabell this is a fantastic poem! you are a kindred spirit for i often feel this way about my own husband! is any of it from personal experience because its certainly from the heart?
Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29
Posts 678
Portland, OR
3 posted 2005-11-09 04:44 PM


Thanks for the hug, haha, I need it.

And yes, it is currently my own experience, and well, it can be quite frustrating. It is an interesting situation, but the ironic twist is I do not care that I am in such a binding situation. A big sigh. Thanks.

Kristabell

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