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vahustla New Member
since 2005-11-09
Posts 3Va |
I know I'm not what God wants me to be but sometimes it's hard not to be me It's hard not to feel these human emotions even when I did my daily devotions All of this hatred that I have in my heart its hard to let it go when you've had it from the start From your early youth, when ya Dad was drinkin to all the problems now that get you to thinkin why bad stuff happens to kind-hearted souls I've been wonderin this since I was 5 years old As I've grown I still don't understand but I guess it all has to do with a bigger plan Or at least thats what I've always been taught even though doubt arises with each passing thought But I still have faith and I try to always pray even though things get tougher by the day Even through it all I still look forward to tomorrow because there is a girl that takes away all of my sorrow This is my first post and I would like to know what yall think. Thanks for taking time to read this and comment back. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Welcome to PIP, Vahustla! That was quite a write! You express yourself very well. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! It is true, we begin learning some of the harshest truths at a very early age. You caught that, and shared it well! Write on! |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Welcome Bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I enjoyed how you related to "what we've all felt and pondered at times" Well done and a great Welcome to PIP. Keep on penning |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to Passions !! Enjoyed your first post. hugs, Chris |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What a great first post - and I am one that can sure identify with your words. quote:There is a reason for it all and it makes us better people in the end. Through adversities we learn to not perpetuate the cycles that caused pain in our past. This, hopefully makes this world a better place, and us better people. Loved this! A heartfelt first posting and...  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to these blue pages. Your heartfelt expressions of life's turmoils will be well recognized by many readers. You've had to learn some of life's hardest lessons at an early age. Welcome to Passions, where you can share these thoughts in writing, which is a great way to release some of the more painful episodes of life while also celebrating those warm happy moments. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Welcome to Passions in Poetry. A very thought provoking write. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hello! Welcome to your new home away from home! You are now among kindred spirits who share and care. Your debut poem was open, honest, and very moving. We are all works in progress, so please, do not be so hard on yourself. You have been through so much in this life ~ and remember! ~ God loves you!  God bless you, Dear Vahustla, Sending you a warm welcoming hug, Earth Angel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent entrance post.... Welcome to Passions!  Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A poem of hope...I like it. Welcome to the family. Please check your email for a special greeting.  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
JLink, Mysteria doesn't really wear a mask. Welcome to Passions. You'll find a lot of people here with experience at the pain of life. And there are many answers. Most of them don't sound like solutions or even what we want to hear. I wish you peace. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (does happy dance) Yay! This is an emotionally powerful first post, sweet friend, here, so many of us share these deepest emotions you feel and indeed in my experience I believe it makes great therapy to share these feelings with one another, as this is a community that sympathizes and reaches out to one another as friends and artists alike, yay! I love this, sweet friend, welcome to Passions! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful poetry, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vahustla, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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vahustla New Member
since 2005-11-09
Posts 3Va |
I just want to thank all of you for your support, encouragement and warm welcome. I really appriciate it. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
 Hello and welcome to Passions In Poetry. I was touched by your poem and the way you wrote your heart-felt feelings. Thanks for sharing with us. Hugs, Ethel aka garysgirl |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I think you done good. Welcome to Pip! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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PoetessFlamme Junior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 20France |
Poured your heart and soul out! That is what poetry is all about. very good! |
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