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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan 
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Alone I sit thinking of you, hoping you'll hear my thoughts. Feel my fingers gently entwine within yours as I softly whisper your name. Hear my words as I speak them quietly in your ear. Close your eyes to rest, let my spirit embrace you close to this heart. Let this ardon fill your dream of desire unlike those you've always known. Let my soul soothe you, love you, til night meets the dawn. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Thinking of You" crossed my mind as a possible title. Actually you have many lines in your poem that would be perfect. This was absolutely loverly! So gentle, sweet and loving. The ending was the clincher! "Let my soul soothe you, love you, til night meets the dawn." A beautifully expressed poem of love!  Linda |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Very nice.....  enjoyed -----------ice ><> |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Very sweet. Enjoyed. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 a soft goodnite hug writewell done, froggygal |
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