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Yogi
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0 posted 2005-11-08 04:47 PM



Snow gently falling
On this cold dark winters night
Like many winters past
Descending petals lay around frozen grounds
Applying this glistening blanket all around

It was winters past when you flew
With angel wings to heaven new
So with each snow petal that falls
Soft and gentle to the touch
Reminds me of you

Know in winters future
You will be all around me
I’ll never be alone
As from heaven you will fall
Showing your love with never melt away for me



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jennirey
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1 posted 2005-11-08 05:01 PM


"So with each snow petal that falls
Soft and gentle to the touch
Reminds me of you"

I like this imagery.. Snow petals What a novel thought. Im stuck here in texas and Just about sick of summer. Using the AC in November. Thanks.. It seems much cooler here.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2005-11-08 05:10 PM


Yogi, thank you for an amazingly beautiful winter write!
Alwye
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In the space between moments
3 posted 2005-11-15 04:48 PM


This is so sad and yet mournfully beautiful.  It touched me.

Back to the top with it!

~*Krista Lee Knutson*~

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of time like dew on the tip of a leaf.
~Rabindranath Tagore


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