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Poetryatheart
Junior Member
since 2005-10-05
Posts 16
Jax, FL

0 posted 2005-11-08 12:44 PM


I fell in love
when you first
looked into my eyes

we stood there stareing holding each other tight
from day one
you held my heart in your hands

But somewhere along the way
some one had to take you away

and now I sit alone in my room
washing you
were here
holding me close
to my heart
never to part

Never having to wonder
when I'll see you
never to hurt
as bad as I do
Becase I have never
loved a guy
as much as I love you

hope, love, is the value of poetry

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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-11-08 01:08 PM


beautiful!
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-11-08 01:09 PM


Lovely indeed.
Hugs~Nancy

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2005-11-08 11:20 PM


Enjoyed...James
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