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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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the message the dream, became real enough to touch not only with mind, but with holiday tradition it was that “hidden inheritance” falling awake soft truth of a living God~ wielded formulation, eternal liberty of omnipotence there I would understand idyllic childhood & being free from trepidation finding the heart’s truest guides credible awareness, magik yes....! interstellar organ donors if you will life force particles evensong, night secrets whispering soothing like a sensitive primer offering warmth an upward personal intimacy with compelling insight suspended above human interests & desires… resonating subtle birthplace claiming appreciation in a temporal field the sleepless people winning novella~ a genetic engineering so profound so vast almost inconceivable it is a culture interpreting world perspective searching & painfully honest filled with freshness which most humans miss returning home is an entity not bound by time or space but stunning prose calling nature a nucleous with free will endowed sacred nessesity ravaging the masses with colorful frontiers... premise for early choices of transformational logic evolving memory into some fascinating psychology some enigmatic element coupling with nature’s bizarre merge into mysteries of quantum reach perhaps a closely guarded secret for now? yes skillful intricate & beautifully nestled on an immense green lawn of blood work ambitious sea comes face to face with interpretations embarking on a far more complex expertise tidal waves of an entity of it's word~ unique in scope & power like a first love it lays awake beneath the skin for that breathless moment... that anonymous call to slip in... and there...(sigh) I am free spirit in my real dream... in this eucalyptus signature of Him... He was & has always been there... waiting... in that most sensual image & passionate faith accepting, the true self of all there is... there... there is a rekindled union of greatest pleasure purest sound & color the senses... there I live in that wool in that midst of my dream by the fire in stars undressing boundaries surrounded by azure wildlife free verse of waterfalls my life’s best fantasy [This message has been edited by LeeJ (11-08-2005 11:39 AM).] |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Going off to work today humming this song... "life force particles, evensong night secrets whispering, soothing, like a sensitive primer offering warmth, an upward personal intimacy with compelling insight, suspended above human interest, desires… a resonating subtle birthplace claiming appreciation in a temporal field" Thanks for the nice send off....  -----------ice ><> |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Not sure I go off sing this song Rather long for me I prefer the shorter verse Still a pleasure to read When conviction hits the page Gloom |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You always have a magic way to convey your innermost emotions, dear Lee. Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Lovely Lee! There are so many visuals, concepts, sensations ~ and energy in your writing! I especially enjoyed your closing lines: "and there I live, in that wool in that midst of my dream by the fire in stars, undressing boundaries surrounded by azure wildlife and free verse of the waterfalls of my life’s best fantasy" May your day treat you well!   Linda |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
“and there I live, in that wool in that midst of my dream by the fire in stars, undressing boundaries surrounded by azure wildlife and free verse of the waterfalls of my life’s best fantasy” And it sounds like a marvelous place to be living. Beautiful write Lee J. But then I’ve come to anticipate that from you. This is a classic Lee J, for sure. JL |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ To "fall awake"....what a wonderful place you visit then...I'm going to try it! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"He was & has always been there... waiting... in that most sensual image & passionate faith accepting, the true self of all there is... there... there is a rekindled union of greatest pleasure purest sound & color the senses..." What can I say that has not already been said? Exquisite write Lee! Beautiful indeed. Hugs~Nancy Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"interstellar organ donors if you will" grinning here, loving that visual imagery and thanking you for this absoulutely delightful read |
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