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logical
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0 posted 2005-11-07 10:37 PM


Vultures hover silently 'round a body,
it moves,
not yet dead,
but alive nevermore.

Eyes turned upwards,
towards tumultuous skies,
looking for salvation,
a demon looks down.

Forgotten on a nameless battlefield,
angel's begin to cry,
as he contorts his face,
into an everlasting smile.


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1 posted 2005-11-07 10:40 PM





Enjoyed your first post !!

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2 posted 2005-11-08 04:11 PM


"Logical" welcome to Passions!

Such stark imagery, I am seeing a
King-like creation step into this scene.

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3 posted 2005-11-08 09:23 PM


Welcome to Pip!

great first post...I'll keep an eye out for more.

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4 posted 2005-11-08 11:52 PM


welcome to the passion
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5 posted 2005-11-10 09:45 AM


Welcome to Passions, I hope you enjoy your time here, please check your email for a special greeting.....


Greeneyes~

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6 posted 2005-11-10 10:12 AM


Welcome to Passions, I hope you enjoy your time here as you get to know us and we get to know your work.  
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7 posted 2005-11-10 12:53 PM


"Forgotten on a nameless battlefield"

I like to think that no one is forgotten by everyone.  

Welcome to Passions!
  

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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8 posted 2005-11-12 10:18 AM


Welcome to PIP


Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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