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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA 
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I found a thing I like Like many poets do. Do different forms delight you? You, then, may like it, too! A conachlonn, it's called, Called by the Celts that way. Way to connect the lines, Lines chain-linked in display. The last word of each line Lines up to lead the next. Next time you want to try, Try not to be perplexed! So show me what you've got. Got time to give a try? Try not to give up soon Soon you will write like I!!!  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
sometimes I can do these these do fustrate me more than others others may find them easier to do than me me? I will stick to forms not so hard! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Yeah right!  If only writing like you happened that easy. I am going to try it though. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh 'Deer this could be hard you know? Know I am trying the best I can Can you see I do try hard 'Deer, 'Deer do you understand? ROTFL...this one was fun to try 'Deer. I'm just so used to writing in free verse. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind While the moon and the clouds come spinning Will you whisper my name again? Again...and again... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I will try most anything, anything that's fun! Fun is what I came here for-- for this--but you and I would probably have fun alone-- (alone together possibly?)  Possibly that's just a dream. A dream of how I would... rhyme a twine of poetry. Poetry with assonence! Assonence? (I'm innocent!) Innocent in rhyme.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So, that is what it is called!! I remember doing something very similar, and at that time, we didn't know if it had a name or not! Geez...now I have to go FIND it! |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Interesting interesting to try try to be interesting interesting am I I and you!!  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I'll join you in the write Write now, I'll place these words Words that show the pleasure Pleasure given when heard For here between these lines Lines space the meanings so So every one who reads Reads rhyming sounds each go Chain-linked fun, this word form Form words formed thoughts for you You know I challenge well Well challenged, I can do So try me when you can Can do in trying times Time's about to end now Now wasn't this a crime? M |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
SEA...you gave it a fine try! Nuttin' wrong with that  Mysteria...we're gonna wait for ya! Enchantress..I understand! I understand! You done good trying! Serenity..good grief! You could make any form erotic! Not only did you adhere to the tules of the form, you did it with extremely clever wordplay. Is there nothing you can't do? Sunshine...happy hunting! Martie...interesting you are/are you prepared to try?/Try a time or two/to give up is to die. Thanks for joining in, miss! nakdthoughts..you certainly DO challenge well. I should have known better!! Thank you for the wonderful lines (and what's between them). To all of you, I thank you. It's always fun to tax the brain a bit and explore parts of poetry less known. You are all great sports! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Deer -- I love this form! I may give it a whirl myself as it does appeal to me! Not only did you gift us with information....but you excelled at it! Thanks. .....jo |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Gee Balladeer, I am still trying to get the imabic pentameter, perfectly. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
LOL, I wouldn't hold yer breath there Michael, this darn life is getting in the way, but when I do it I sure will send it - I promise! |
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