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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-11-07 07:44 AM


Circling

Circling in an ethereal soar
I searched within my dark of store
And lay me down in bodies rest
To let my spirit fly in quest

And fly I did to wonderland
To fan desires firebrand
To place an arrow, loves impart
Deep within my lovers heart

We kissed and there she took my arm
To guide me to a rainbows farm
That arched into a sky of blue
With magic showing every view

And there within the rays of gold
We saw an Ivy castle bold
That beckoned us a final goal
To make of us one final soul

It’s here within my amnesty
I find a final destiny


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-11-07 08:15 AM



So good to have you home again...
how was the cruise?

scorpio
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right...there
2 posted 2005-11-07 08:48 AM


A rainbow's farm.  I can only imagine how beautiful that must be Sy.

believe in what your heart feels...

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just out of reach
3 posted 2005-11-07 08:49 AM


Tis undying love you speak of this morning Seymour. How lovely.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Enchantress
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4 posted 2005-11-07 09:04 AM


This is wonderful Seymour!
I do hope you and the Mrs. enjoyed your cruise.
~Morning hugs, Nancy~

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2005-11-07 09:56 AM


Good morning, Everybody's Favourite Sonneteer! Flowers

May you forever circle in ethereal soar
In in the Rainbow Land of Forevermore!

May you live in castle of ivy bold
And bask in sunny rays of gold.

May Cupid's arrow add to your love
And blessings fall from sky above.

Love & castles in the sky!
EA

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (11-07-2005 12:47 PM).]

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2005-11-07 10:44 AM


And fly I did to wonderland
To fan desires firebrand
To place an arrow, loves impart
Deep within my lovers heart

We kissed and there she took my arm
To guide me to a rainbows farm
That arched into a sky of blue
With magic showing every view

And there within the rays of gold
We saw an Ivy castle bold
That beckoned us a final goal
To make of us one final soul

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Well now...that must a been some cruise.
I hope ya took pictures.

Welcome back me groovy Sy-guy.
All is right in your rhymes this morn.

*ww*


CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30
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Alberta, Canada
7 posted 2005-11-07 01:17 PM



Well done. Enjoyed the read.

CG

iliana
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8 posted 2005-11-07 09:56 PM


"And there within the rays of gold
We saw an Ivy castle bold
That beckoned us a final goal
To make of us one final soul

It’s here within my amnesty
I find a final destiny"

A love neverending....final destiny.  Beautiful, Sy!   ......jo

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
9 posted 2005-11-07 10:22 PM


It's so good to see you, again. Beautiful, as always.
ecrivan
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10 posted 2005-11-07 10:28 PM


good reading, welcome back


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