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Reason To Winter
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Reason To Winter |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A dusting waits beyond the sash Attuned the moan of longing Curving slight of Venus brow Elongated remnants recall pine trails Patiently, speaks the creek of eager bark By the wind chimes change And I… I feel the cold at the moment Restless in the banter of a too full mind Carved and fitted, here I hold the answers Yet they lack and neutral colors every edge Too much pours from my heart Flowing over all the walls and overtaking hem Or if I needed just a little time It seems to fall upon the back of concern And morning remains faceless But I… I feel alone at the moment Though temporary is as sure as this And just perhaps that is the reason In moments like these, winter makes sense Copyright Kkh 11/6/05 |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
feel alone at the moment Though temporary is as sure as this And just perhaps that is the reason In moments like these, winter makes sense Perfect sense the pause between the growing and the grieving of the tree a time for clarity |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Dearest Kay, you have written such feelings so accurately...at a time when they can come and go, whirr and whirl about...and though you feel alone, you are not..., nor will you be. For there are many others, myself included...who have felt this feel. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your last four lines will reside to warm hearts all winter long, TD... so good to read you. Almost looking forward to winter in my writer's nook... so that I can visit the poets more often.  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
There is that feeling as winter approaches, and I feel it,too, on days like today. So well expressed, Kathleen. ....jo |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh,TD, this is wonderful. I am placing it into my library straight away. hugs to you dear poetess. Chris  Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
yes in moments like these winter makes sense i liked that , great to read your work again see ya td ~wolfman |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"I feel alone at the moment Though temporary is as sure as this And just perhaps that is the reason In moments like these, winter makes sense" So true, so true!! Strikes a cord with me. Beautiful write. JL |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I know this mood and you captured it, with mastery. Like seeing your own breath briefly in exhale. It's been too long since I have read you, m'friend. Very much enjoyed. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
And I… I feel the cold at the moment Restless in the banter of a too full mind Carved and fitted, here I hold the answers Yet they lack and neutral colors every edge this is a feeling I love...and love reading someone else understands it to... marvelous write |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
wow, this may become one of my favorite Diamond writes it is...exquisite *library* |
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