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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-11-06 10:40 AM


A Brazen Cup

Desire poured a brazen cup
That woke my alter ego up
And I was winded like a chime
To wake a different place and time

Spirited in mind and grace
To an ethereal time and space
Where green the dominant of scene
And I a king and you a queen

A kingdom set upon a hill
With rainbow roads that roamed at will
Where flowered beds of butterflies
Blew wave on wave of colored tides

And clouded chariots raced on high
Within a raptures golden sky
Splashing dew in dancing blue
Flashing like a diamonds view

And when this treasure took a bend
It brought this pleasure to an end



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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2005-11-06 10:42 AM


A kingdom set upon a hill
With rainbow roads that roamed at will
Where flowered beds of butterflies
Blew wave on wave of colored tides

pretty words, Sy


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2 posted 2005-11-06 10:57 AM


Sy

A magical place and feeling...I want to go there!!  It's good to see you...you've been missed.  

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3 posted 2005-11-06 11:12 AM


Welcome back Sir Sy of T.  Hope you enjoyed
your jaunt upon the seas.

Enchantress
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4 posted 2005-11-06 11:30 AM


Hey Sy!  You're back!!
And you and your morning verses have been so missed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2005-11-06 11:51 AM


Mr. T.! You've come home to us! I do not believe I could have stood another day without your sweet sonneteering presence!

Your poetic gift this morning brings me smiles.

I am sending both you and your beloved Isabel a tremendously loving, comforting, healing hug! You have been through so much!

God bless you!

You just added your glorious Light to my day! Welcome home, T-Man!

Angel hugs 'n kisses,
EA
Flowers

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6 posted 2005-11-06 12:16 PM


Where flowered beds of butterflies
Blew wave on wave of colored tides

Something tells me someone we both know is going to love those lines Sy!

Hope you get back to normal soon, I have sure been thinking about you both.  Take care now.

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just out of reach
7 posted 2005-11-06 03:01 PM


Hello Seymour !! Welcome home !!
I have missed your writings so much.
Thankyou for this.   hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

scorpio
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8 posted 2005-11-06 04:28 PM


Well done and welcome back. You were certainly missed.

believe in what your heart feels...

iliana
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9 posted 2005-11-07 12:02 PM


It is great to see you, Sy!!!!!  Hope all is well....from the looks of this poem (if it is a reflection of your life) all IS well!   ......jo
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