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When Myst Shall Reign
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When Myst Shall Reign |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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When Myst Shall Reign I watch as the world passes by. My future, a yesterday's glance. Though air is warmed in season's false, I'm chilled by this feverish dance. I rise to the sunshine's appeal. Straining to do as I should. Cleansing my thoughts to the forward of day Waiting for "what ifs", if I could. I trip over words on this morn. Wondering when pressures will light. Weighted by more than the wait of the reign Contentment shall myst come the night. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I loved this write Maureen, but my first instinct is to yell, "Tell them to get out of the house!" LOL  Those "what if's" can actually eat at your mind, and keeping busy fills a soul full of joy, and promise, not to mention meeting new people  . |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I trip over words on this morn. Wondering when pressures will light. Weighted by more than the wait of the reign Contentment shall myst come the night." An excellent write Maureen... Hope you are well, hugs~Nancy Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
a misty forlorn feel yet the night lifts the haze. very poetic |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I love to see wordplay like this...and you do it so well. I've myst you!!  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I saw this gem this morning.... I knew I would return... just as I knew you knew I would. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"I trip over words on this morn. Wondering when pressures will light. Weighted by more than the wait of the reign Contentment shall myst come the night." This has real personal meaning for me and I can relate to where you're coming from....well done, Maureen!  ....jo |
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