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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-11-05 11:16 PM



There was a time
As far as you are
I would have suffered
For the gaze

To see me
However briefly
Enthralled with you
Would have brought Valkyrie
From a sky

Above from where
All law was cruel
Forged around a single sin

To be so free
As to cherish sea
The color blue . . .

Or eyes
That found my own

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-11-08 01:04 PM


beautifully written and expressed, those soft soft moments of memory...lapse into its own time and sea....fond ones...
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2 posted 2005-11-08 02:03 PM



It's nice, but I don't get the title ???
Does it mean written by Oswald Grill, or what exactly ?
Enlighten me please ?

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Huan Yi
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3 posted 2005-11-08 02:18 PM


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4 posted 2005-11-08 07:25 PM


"To be so free
As to cherish sea
The color blue . . ."

yes....

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5 posted 2005-11-08 07:48 PM


Huan

When you write like this, I am really touched by the soft flow of feeling within your words.  I'm thinking that Oswald Grill must be a place to eat?

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6 posted 2007-04-21 02:48 PM


Blue again.

good!

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