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0 posted 2005-11-05 06:33 PM


Slaves Of The Stars
By: Noah Eaton
11/5/05

Ironing gossamer,
solving satin,
girdle of the year,
clothed in a white-gold chemise,
feeling your body rise,
in morning star course,
you keep sharing what is mine,
I keep sharing what is yours...

Cause we’re all slaves of the stars,
we’re riddles of why our hearts have beated from the start,
and every time you go down for me,
I only come up resurfacing for moonlight.
Virginity can be lost by a thought,
mmm, but your grace makes everything so pure,
nothing can slow our beating hearts,
cause we’re all slaves of the stars...

Verdant, untamed bodies,
soaked in dalliance,
blooming with hot whispers unheard,
myriads of velvet silhouettes,
speaking in your tongue,
mmm, your aura is my bedsheet,
we can’t tell stars from fireflies,
we can’t tell stars from fireflies...

Cause we’re all slaves of the stars,
we’re riddles of why our hearts have beated from the start,
and every time you go down for me,
I only come up resurfacing for moonlight.
Virginity can be lost by a thought,
mmm, but your grace makes everything so pure,
nothing can slow our beating hearts,
cause we’re all slaves of the stars...

Chariots of moisture,
sweep across your lively shoulders,
orphaned in our chimera,
orphaned in our chimera...

Cause we’re all slaves of the stars,
we’re riddles of why our hearts have beated from the start,
and every time you go down for me,
I only come up resurfacing for moonlight.
Virginity can be lost by a thought,
mmm, but your grace makes everything so pure,
nothing can slow our beating hearts,
cause we’re all slaves of the stars...

Ironing gossamer,
solving satin,
your hair falls me in my face,
tasting your delicate static...


"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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1 posted 2005-11-05 07:16 PM



Noah, I do believe we romantics are all "Slaves of the Stars"! Stars

"mmm, your aura is my bedsheet"

~ mmm, mmm, mmm, indeed!

You exude love from every pore of your poetic soul!

May you be as loved as you are loving.


Linda

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2 posted 2005-11-05 07:56 PM


Very sensuous Noah. I like this.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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3 posted 2005-11-05 08:37 PM


Noah

"Ironing gossamer,
solving satin,"

It's good to see you in this state of love...you are so enthusiastic.  



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4 posted 2005-11-07 06:25 PM


This is truly exquisite, dear Noah! Intensely romantic with many poetic highlights.
You shine with love in this creation and I will keep it, for it is one of my favorites of yours.
We have missed you!
Love,
Margherita


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5 posted 2005-11-07 09:45 PM


Noah, this is the most romatic expression....ahhhhhh.......breathtaking!   ......jo
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