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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2005-11-05 01:01 PM





~Gonna slip in here and dedicate this one to Kacy/MidniteSun~
~Just 'on account of'~



~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

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Martie
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1 posted 2005-11-05 01:04 PM


Marge/sis

An appropriate dedication...the poem is a sad truth that hopefully isn't too late to change.  

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2 posted 2005-11-05 01:05 PM


Oh Marge...this took my breath away!
The picture...the words..perfect!
And I know our Kacy with her passionate love
of Mother Earth and nature
is going to absolutely love this too!!
Hugs~Nancy

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

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3 posted 2005-11-05 04:13 PM


Oh...wow...Madame Marge.  Another masterpiece.  I was thoroughly touched by this!  Lovely...thought provoking...evocative piece!

Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine
Still shrouded in blinding Darkness

ice
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4 posted 2005-11-05 04:25 PM


Marge
This poem and picture gives me chills..not the kind you get when you are frightened, and want to flee, but the rush you get when you decide to stand and fight..

On staring into the eyes in the picture I feel a sense of anger, but also a sense of hope and forgiveness for the sins done to mother earths body...but I also see that she is getting anxious and worried...

The picture is perfect, the words are awesome...Kacy holds Joan of Arcs sword,  is always prepared to battle with those who insult and assult the earth...Thank you for dedicating it to her...

------------ice
    ><>

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5 posted 2005-11-05 04:34 PM


Excellent dedication of a wonderful write.
TD

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6 posted 2005-11-06 02:24 AM


Dear Marge

Man's greed has robbed us of God's beautiful gift of nature to us all!  This really gave me goosebumps!  Your poem and picture is a very haunting reminder of what man has done!

Thank you for this, as we all need a 'wake up' call!

Love Verbena xo


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7 posted 2005-11-06 06:25 AM




All she gave us abundently
is no where to be found...

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

So true...so true
& said just so wonderfullly Marge as always.

Thank you

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8 posted 2005-11-06 07:45 AM


Lately it seems Mother Nature is showing her temper too..lovely write Marge.
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9 posted 2005-11-06 08:05 AM


This is very beautiful Marge

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10 posted 2005-11-06 08:42 AM


It is saddening, isn't it?  So much of our
planet has been plundered in the name of
progress and expansion of civilization.  

A beautiful picture...tks

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11 posted 2005-11-06 10:54 AM


beautifully written and imaged~

M

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12 posted 2005-11-06 03:05 PM


OUTSTANDING Marge.....
scorpio
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13 posted 2005-11-06 04:26 PM


In a word..wow!!

believe in what your heart feels...

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14 posted 2005-11-07 12:29 PM


I hope not, Marge....but you make the point very well!!!  We need to save what is left.  And yes, I believe she has been weeping, too.   ....jo
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15 posted 2005-11-07 01:20 PM



A heart wrenching dedication, in its simplicity.

I hope it's not too late....

CG

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16 posted 2005-11-07 01:43 PM


Very nice!!

JL

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17 posted 2005-11-07 01:53 PM


What can I say, beyond thank you? SIGH, you've brought a silent tear to my eye with this, Marge.
And in tune with all the others who've commented, I sincerely hope we find ways to amend our destructive ways while we still have a planet to enjoy.
Thank you, from the bottom of my heart for the kindness of this dedication!
hugs, Kacy

Marge Tindal
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18 posted 2005-12-06 11:41 AM



Thanks all ... Kacy ? ...

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email -       noles1@totcon.com       

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