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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-11-05 02:57 AM



If one puts
A single finger
Into his eye
The owner
Would curse you
For the harm

How then
Can a body
However beautiful
Not be as well
As much a hurt

For if it takes
The heart away
From being in all
That life can give

Is not that form
However fair
A wound upon
What might have been

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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-04-21 03:11 PM


If one puts
A single finger      
Into his eye      
The owner            
Would curse you
For the harm        

How then
Can a body
However beautiful
Not be as well
As much a hurt

For if it takes
The heart away
From being in all
That life can give

Is not that form
However fair
A wound upon
What might have been

S1 insults hurt S3 a heart(means life)
More than  S2, s4 the body

I wonder how people read this one in the year of 2600 when authur is unknown.

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