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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2005-11-04 07:14 PM



Moonlite Lady

If I could
have my say,
I'd watch
her hula sway
until the sun
goes down,
admiring her
in moonlite glow,
tiki torches
all around.
Like this
cool ocean breeze,
she pleases me,
I love the
tropical flower
in her hair.
If she beckoned me,
I would go to her,
tender moments
we would share,
me and moonlite lady.

JamesLee
November04
2005

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-11-04 07:16 PM


Oh she does sound like a sexy lady James.
Love this one..I can almost she her dance.
Hugs~Nancy

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

inkedgoddess
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Ohio
2 posted 2005-11-04 08:01 PM


she wears it well
doesnt she?
very lovely moony stuff jam=es

Constance
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3 posted 2005-11-05 11:39 AM


I liked this very much James. I especially loved the feeling that it was the kind of musing we have when, on an ordinary day, something lovely captures us. This poem is my lovely thing today---pleasing, like your lady.

smiles,
Constanc

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4 posted 2005-11-05 12:40 PM


OHH YEAHHH ....i have just realized i need a vacation this winter , thanks for the insight and the poem rocks
it took me to a place i needed to go this fine saturday ....thanks and i hope she does dance her way into your heart
~wolf

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5 posted 2005-11-05 02:08 PM


OhJamesMichael~
You're a smoothie, you are~

Love it~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

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