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vandana
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0 posted 2005-11-04 05:48 PM



Iam asking you
Only one night,
I want this love to be right,
Just one night with you,
My love,
If you give one night,
I will live with you,
I want to share my love
With you,
So let me stay with you,
Iam only asking one night
With you,
Our song is playing into night,
Let us dance into light,
Let us take a chance,
And make this night,
come true,
Just one night with you,
Only the stars will show us
Way to heaven,
Just one night,
Time will be right forever,
Between us,
Just one night,
Nothing compares,
Nothing will come between us,
For just one night,
Whether love is wrong or right
Let our song play,
All night long,
Let our hearts be strong,
To the heaven above,
Just one night
With your love forever....

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1 posted 2005-11-04 06:09 PM


Very nice vandana. Enjoyed.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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2 posted 2005-11-04 06:15 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautifully romantic, sweet friend, I yearn to feel true love for the first time myself and bet it is the most magical feeling of all! (sigh) Yay, I know you will find the most wonderful love and happiness will forever shine in your heart, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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3 posted 2005-11-04 06:17 PM


Very beautifully written and much enjoyed.
Hugs~Nancy

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2005-11-04 07:09 PM


Enjoyed...James
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5 posted 2005-11-04 10:57 PM


Oh, yes... I know this plea... and you've written it beautifully!
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