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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2005-11-03 11:21 PM



Tan, small, simple, straight
forward the prose profess
the elements of style.
The way wrote itself
that carried,
rather knowing or not,
rulebook
illustrations,
potential struck
examples,
very clear, honesty
humor,
nonchalant blood,
particularly sensible,
striped blue pajamas
contemplating arousal.
The beginning-
next step: commission-
collective belief
set to music
-quite new-
transformed,
creative.


-------- found art. subject: NPR: Most E-Mailed Stories for Thursday, 03 Nov 2005.

© Copyright 2005 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2005-11-03 11:25 PM


Wow.

I thought this would be a treatise on Strunk & White, and here I find one of my favorite topics..."found art".

nice, nice, what you did with this, a clean design, and not all bothersome with the frou-frou.

excellent Waltie.

My how you have grown!

I liked this very.

wayoutwalt
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2 posted 2005-11-03 11:28 PM


yup it is about Strunk and White. the podcast was about how someone was setting the book to opera. yet it seems relevant to so many things. Thanks for the boost. It's been along time since I've written anything.
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3 posted 2005-11-03 11:40 PM


Wow Walt your writing sure has taken on a mature feel to it, this was just great and it is also great to see you posting again, welcome back (for now.)
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4 posted 2005-11-04 06:54 AM


The way wrote itself

~*~

Walt...

It's so good to see your wayout self again...


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