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HopeS
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0 posted 2005-11-03 10:07 AM




You Say Sorry Too Often

Stop being the coward
Stand up and be a man
Prove you are not weak
Show the truth if you can

Only a coward will hide
Afraid of facing the fact
Prove you have a spine
Stop continuing your act

Brave behind the mask
Hiding in your disguise
You say sorry too often
Trying to cover your lies

You're the lowest of low
God help your poor wife
You are full of deception
Go and get yourself a life


Hope ©2005
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http://thestarlitecafe.com/poems/94/poem_790955.html

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1 posted 2005-11-03 10:12 AM


whoa baby! This packs one heck of a punch...very well done!
HopeS
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2 posted 2005-11-03 10:13 AM


Thanks Susan , yes I needed to vent !!!


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3 posted 2005-11-03 10:14 AM


Hope~
This one has the sting of well-worded scorn~
How sad that it has to be written at all~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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HopeS
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4 posted 2005-11-03 10:16 AM


Thanks Marge , you know the saying "hell hath no fury , like a woman scorned

Hope

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5 posted 2005-11-03 01:16 PM


I LOVE IT!!!
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