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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2005-11-02 08:12 PM

... for pdv

I was pushed into the world
Set in motion
Wound on the stove and watched every second
Perverted, hollowed, wooed and attacked
Served, rejected, lifted and held – whispered about
I was pushed into the world
Told to perform
Given a monologue that should never be spoken
Dropped on the “x”, I’ve seen men survive
But for this world, I was pushed
And fell when set into motion

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-11-02 08:17 PM

hey! Cool...it's good to read you again!

This is really neat.

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2005-11-02 08:30 PM

Thank you Walt...it's nice to see you here again. You've been missed!! How did the Halloween costume turn out?

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

3 posted 2005-11-02 08:39 PM

WOW is back! WooHoo!!! Now I just have to figure out what he said.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2005-11-02 08:47 PM

waycoolwalt!!!

It's great to read you again m'friend...

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2005-11-02 09:13 PM

Hi Walt!!!

Gee, it's great to read you again.
hope you are well.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

6 posted 2005-11-02 09:35 PM

this is real good write, thanks for sharing, this, keep up the good poetry.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2005-11-02 11:06 PM

Served, rejected, lifted and held – whispered about

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Aww yes, the old push and pull is quite the concept...

Does my heart good to read you here, Waltzie!

aujussy wolf

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since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

8 posted 2005-11-03 08:55 PM

Given a monologue that should never be spoken
Dropped on the “x”, I’ve seen men survive
But for this world, I was pushed
And fell when set into motion



walt , good to read your work again
grand , sad, power,wise and soul all came to my mind after reading this
~wolf

shatteredsilver
Member

since 2005-03-31

Posts 63
middle of nowhere

9 posted 2005-11-03 10:12 PM

I was pushed into the world
Told to perform
Given a monologue that should never be spoken

love these lines, they remind me of some speech tournaments

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

10 posted 2005-11-03 10:40 PM

I was so happy to see you I forgot to mention that I loved the title and premise of this.

I too was pushed.

Then they grabbed me by the ankles. (breach birth yanno)

When I held onto mum's ovaries, they finally cut me out.

grin

nod

I knew what I was in for.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2005-11-04 07:41 AM

Yes...

it is Really Good
to have you back!

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