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Loneliness (revised)
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Loneliness (revised) |
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the kid Junior Member
since 2005-06-24
Posts 16 |
Loneliness kills you like an uncured disease, it’s a burning desire a want and a need, to have someone there when all is not right, and no hope is near for when life's brought you down and put you in tears. It goes to your mind and attacks all your fears mostly the fear that nobody cares, that nobody’s there, but don’t let it win and give up the fight, for if you do this you'll never be right, your life will be ruined and you'll never find light just cause you let loneliness win and take control of your mind. |
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the kid Junior Member
since 2005-06-24
Posts 16 |
lol what do u guys think that one or Lonliness hurts, its a burning desire it feels as if your hearts constantly on fire it makes you feel empty inside like something is missing like somethings not right some keep it hidden and continue to deny that the feeling is there and still burning bright its like a disease no cure is in sight it refuses to die, its just keeps growing in your mind some say their fine some keep it confined deep inside but all you are doing is ignoring the signs that disease has won and possesed your mind but you can fight it by remembering the past and all the good times that you had enjoyed for memories last forever and theyll always keep you sane just never give up and let it win just keep fighting until the very end. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Loneliness can be all consuming, this I know. Oh sure there is help out there, if you can afford it, and even more if you are open to it. But my experience has been, concentrating on the things, (choices) I have control over, and weeding through my desire to have and have not. Life is hard, but in the end, getting used to the company we keep, (which is often our own) isn't such a bad thing, and sometimes all there is. Smile, and be glad you have the wits about you to work through it, and know what a difference today makes. |
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