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the white feather
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the white feather |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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she danced the dance of the white feather and all who watched were entranced for the way she floated over the ground the way she turned, round and round lighter than any feather thought to be she danced the white feather better than the white feather and in the morning light when all the sky was bright she spun around and danced again and hearts soared, floated upon the clouds in the bluest sky and everyone wondered why this feather didn't fall she danced the dance of the white feather and all who watched were entranced |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
really liked this one a good story : ) ~wolfie |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Entranced....was I, as well! My imagination soared easily with this one!  .....jo |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Always good to hear your mind at work, Kacy. Nice writing. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
White feathers were sent to perceived cowards during world war 2 but I don't think this is your meaning. I prefer to relate it to a story I once read of a young island lass who danced as your poem depicts and became a misunderstood natural healer. She just disappeared one day but not before leaving many entranced. Enjoyed the read. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
my friends, thank you so much, for reading and dearest Honeybunch? thanks for that reply, for I had never heard of white feathers being synonomous with cowardice...how very sad and yes, the magical white feather dancer in my mind is indeed, a natural healer....as song and dance combined can often set the mind and spirit free to roam the skies above, within the beauty that is...life itself |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
the muse that forever flows alongside our souls, reading to us a book of faith, and dancing a dance of joy, love and everlasting grace. Wonderful feeling this endows...thank you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kacy~ You would already know that there is a Spirit of me that greatly enjoyed this one~  A delightfully soft render it is~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wow. Now this is weird. I woke from a very vivid dream this morning, which ended with four white feathers, spiraling downward into my outreached hand. I was going to write about that, but methinks you just did.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
thanking each of you for reading and commenting and K? how strange! proof that we ARE spirit sisters? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your words danced as lightly as a feather down the page...  Love & Light, Linda |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Me thinks you tickled my fancy with this write  |
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