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Aimster
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0 posted 2005-11-01 03:23 PM


My life feels like a tidal wave
One moment I'm sky high, the next I'm completely down
It in a split moment my life forever changed
In this sadness, though I refuse to drown

From pain comes true healing
This is what I've been told
It's the experiences that shape us into who we are
Once set, nothing can break that mold

This ocean of life brings one wave after another
For a moment I feel my spirits fall
Then I think of all my blessings
I see the beauty of it all

Still though I can't help feel a little cheated
I never got to see you alive and well
In the past though I shall not remain
For the past is no place to dwell

Something so precious has been taken from me
I will fight though to gain it all back
This will not stop me from living and loving
This won't be the last attack

It is ironic that by losing you
I was able to find the REAL me
It's funny how life works out this way
That pain somehow sets you free

Becky and Mom if you can hear me
Please know that I love you
Take care of each other
Whatever you do

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

© Copyright 2005 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2005-11-01 03:35 PM


Aimster....Your poem reminded me of this one of mine.  Wishing you well!  


Trying to find you
when the sky sends warm
to February
and all the scattered down clouds
have gone to other grief,
I realize,
to be sleeveless
and skip into your place in time
with a smile
is not about looking for you,
but about finding me.


Aimster
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2 posted 2005-11-01 03:45 PM


This pain, so raw
Jagged it cuts like a knife
I want to scream out loud
Why again? How many times in my life?

All I wanted was a chance
To breathe...to breathe that air
Fate wickedly laughed at me
If only I had been there

Walking into that hospital
I felt a cold, a cold to my very soul
Months have passed by
I still do not feel whole

I'm an abanoned shipwreck
No treasure though to be found
Here I am floating
Grasping...gasping...I need solid ground

Stop ripping my soul
I have had enough, no way to continue on
No more please
I've done nothing wrong--

Black skies, stormy seas
Stop at once, I command you
Look at my face, just look
See these tears of blue?

My heart aches
For you both, it makes me so mad
It aches for the one that I lost
Equally as much for the one I never had--

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

Aimster
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3 posted 2005-11-01 03:46 PM


oops wrong place.

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

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