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Open Poetry #36

We Discovered Paradise

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2005-11-01 01:25 PM

We Discovered Paradise

Imagine on a ship sailing
Soft breeze upon the sea
Drifting neath the sunset
As we captured serenity

Hearts charting a course
We landed a dreamy isle
Along a golden pathway
So we could stay awhile

Reaching a sandy beach
With full glow of the moon
We stroll along the shore
Stop by secluded lagoon

Finding this special place
Where we bathe blissfully
We discovered paradise
On our island by the sea

Hope ©2005

Link to poem with music and graphic below
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/94/poem_790453.html

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2005-11-02 12:30 PM

um, nice sailing trip!
enjoyed the peaceful visuals

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2005-11-02 06:46 AM

Finding this special place
Where we bathe blissfully
We discovered paradise
On our island by the sea

special places...wonder if I will ever find one of those~~

Nicely written, as always

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-11-02 08:45 AM

this sang such a happy comforting mood, could feel the slow rocking up and down of those smiling waves....hear the creaking of the wood on the boat, feel sea spray in my face....

thanks for the glorious moment within this smiling face of poetry.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2005-11-02 06:40 PM

Nice...James

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