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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-11-01 07:44 AM


there are certain requirements
for access to the forbidden
if you really want to
if your nerve will allow
you to explore that agony

can I be your tour guide
and open the dark doors
that let you reach under
the hem locks of secrets
to feel the hardness of damp

just before the shuddering winds
make music on the windows
like butterfly wings
against the arousal of you
like the wings of moths

as they devour unspoken virginity


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dark

scribblenote: contimplation of the exploration of day dreams, what ifs, taboos of tradition..and of placing a white sox world champion sticker on my yugo


[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (11-01-2005 11:03 AM).]

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INclan
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since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024
Indiana, USA
1 posted 2005-11-01 10:46 AM


Dark Stranger, I need no guide
to plum the depths of evil tide.
My heart, I know only too well
What blackness there to dwell.
No ray of hope will I be shown,
My reality, I embrace alone.

....Thank you for the offer.  I enjoyed the read!

INclan

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2005-11-01 11:02 AM


in...thanks for the read
some do want/require a guide
to the comforts of their discovery

Ratleader
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3 posted 2005-11-07 10:17 AM


Well....just don't drive yonder Yugo down too many dirt roads....they're just not built for it, and you could lose your sticker in the underbrush....along with the car.

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Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2005-11-07 10:31 AM


thanks RL...mighty kind of you to muse my antics

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2005-11-07 11:00 AM


just before the shuddering winds
make music on the windows
like butterfly wings
against the arousal of you
like the wings of moths

as they devour unspoken virginity

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oh those damn moths...
ya gotta keep them in the dark.     lol  




Thru the water...thru the rain
To the soul of everything
Throw my heart out on the stones
And I'm almost gone

D.Gray

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
6 posted 2005-11-07 12:21 PM


my favorite things
I keep in the dark
as much as possible anyway

thanks lady friend

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