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Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

0 posted 2005-10-31 06:09 PM



Let’s say we had a year or so
It’s what you thought, but did not know
What would change, what would you do?
What inside would churn in you?

Would you change your circumstance?
Change your job and take a chance?
Do the things you’d love to do?
Do what ever yearned in you?

Would you sour with despair?
Knowing soon you’d not be there
Or find a love for time you see?
Accepting what was gonna be

Would you cherish what was there?
Find a different way to share?
See the world through different eyes?
Cherish every new surprise?

Would we try to leave a mark?
A memory that your name would spark?
A legacy that held your name?
A passion some would yearn to tame?

If only for a year or so
Can happen to the friends we know
So maybe everyday we should
Live life as that person would

© Copyright 2005 Rick Van Weenen - All Rights Reserved
wandering glider
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since 2001-04-04
Posts 501
aloft
1 posted 2005-10-31 10:34 PM


You ask of life a special view
when shortness comes to visit you
but if to life you have been true
then what is left for one to do?

Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
2 posted 2005-10-31 11:25 PM


wandering glider, thank you so much for your reply, wonderful words you have shared and how true, all the best my friend.

Sincerely
Rick


iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2005-11-01 01:59 AM


Rick, I agree, we should!  Nice writing.   .......jo
Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
4 posted 2005-11-01 05:13 AM


Hi Jo, thanks for the reply, we should shouldn't we;

Sincerely
Rick

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
5 posted 2005-11-01 03:33 PM


you always make me THINK with your
writing-how so very true this is!

take care.
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
6 posted 2005-11-02 05:51 AM


I'm glad I do Amy, thank you for the visit, always nice to see you my friend. Take care and be well.

Sincerely
Rick

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