Lay down the sword, you say

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wandering glider
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since 2001-04-04

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aloft

0 posted 2005-10-31 03:46 PM

Lay down the sword, you say

We cut sweet apples from the trees
caught them before they fell to bruise
but some wounds add to the crimson hues of fallen leaves
wounds that still drip from the sharp blade of a trust betrayed
Time heals I've told
but I still hear leaves rustling at my feet
and my soul is stained

glider
(thanks to Ratleader for an idea)

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

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with you

1 posted 2005-10-31 03:49 PM

very nicely done, does go good with RL's poem

Ratleader

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2 posted 2005-10-31 04:53 PM

LOL -- over in mine, I just said you ought to post this...then noticed that you already had!

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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

3 posted 2005-11-02 12:15 PM

you have offered yet another
thought filled reply
and as you fly by
so infrequently
I find it means
even more
whenever you gift us
with a write

thank you,
for the hawking moment

shatteredsilver
Member

since 2005-03-31

Posts 63
middle of nowhere

4 posted 2005-11-03 10:19 PM

Time heals I've told
but I still hear leaves rustling at my feet
and my soul is stained

*wordless*

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2005-11-03 11:34 PM

Enjoyed...James

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2005-11-04 01:19 PM

I like this so much!! *S* I'll have to start looking for your work... for to look is to enjoy. *S*

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

7 posted 2005-11-04 04:08 PM

This is so wonderfully expressed and deep though sad.

Thank you

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of

aujussy wolf

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since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

8 posted 2005-11-04 06:13 PM

BOOOOOOOM this is real
~good work man
~wolf

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2005-11-04 06:19 PM

Excellent write! Very much enjoye dthe read glider.
Hugs~Nancy

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

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