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HopeS
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0 posted 2005-10-31 04:26 AM



It Was A Memorable Affair

After I gave all I could
Nothing have I gained
The heart began sinking
I am emotionally drained

My fragile heartstrings
Felt the wear and tear
Although deeply affected
It was a memorable affair

Emotional devastated
It is lonely tears I spill
After emptying my heart
Love never returned to fill

Here I am still yearning
Reverting back to then
I will progress eventually
Still I could not say when


Hope ©2005

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1 posted 2005-10-31 09:18 AM


'Still I could not say when'

I guess it happens when least expected or when one just gives up.  

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2 posted 2005-10-31 12:44 PM


That is usually the way isn't it?  Hope, I moved, and lost your email address can you send me it to sharonmysteria@shaw.ca Happy Halloween to you all there!
HopeS
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3 posted 2005-10-31 12:48 PM


Thanks you Honeeybunch for your thoughtful reply

Hope

HopeS
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4 posted 2005-10-31 12:49 PM


Thank you Sharon , now I know why a couple of emails that I sent came back

Hope

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5 posted 2005-10-31 01:15 PM


Dearest Hope - I had just finished reading and replying to Bernie's poem, and then read yours. It seems this type of ache happens to all of us who have loved, lost .. and still feel our hearts need.
Time is the only answer.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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