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Don_Juan
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Far from where I am going

0 posted 2005-10-31 12:54 PM


A stream of Consciousness to get the ink flowing.

The impending moonlit ray of a clear night fall brings all phrases that mislead
locking tightly among safe gullability
mischevious eyes, straight face lies
and a conscience nonexistent
that peeling plaster, painted images of innocence has been shattered
the mallet driving a nail of trust into a structure already sturdy
is rusted and useless
connive, please, for the last time
I know you all too well today
sobering visions of future tense actions bring slight deviance from a path well plotted.
Do you know yet?
Can you not seee this light all too bright for the blind and enlightened?
you won't know, not yet.
running headlong, falling feet first from the uncaring cliff.
it is your free fall.
freedom is what you wanted, is it not?
grab the outstreched safe grasp, swallow your pride.
I know you all too well as i hope blindly
My grasp will go unnoticed

nice use of muffin



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1 posted 2005-10-31 02:00 PM


John~
I would say that your younger brother is VERY fortunate to have you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

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