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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2005-10-30 05:01 PM



First comes the yellow
tumbling down
tears of the treetops
kissing the ground

leaf onto journey
brushing the sky
calpyso of children
and the cirrus clouds high

drunk on the moonlight
eyes of the child
puzzles unraveled
leaves going wild

kicken up autumn
feet jammim' rhymes
pissing off park rangers
leaves stray their lines

dont come to seek wisdom
in the write of these dots
can't figure out life
rather gather forget me nots

no problems this sunday
as im feeling the floyd
dark side of the moon
loveless love i'll avoid

jargon of gypies
don't you know what i mean?
if you'd ring me with sanity
i'd never feel this serene........(jellybean     )
                          

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Angelheart
Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA
1 posted 2005-10-30 05:28 PM


this made me smile, thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2005-10-31 11:21 PM


and this is what you meant when you told me to go jumping through the leaves?

*smile*

do this, again . . . tomorrow

(look at you with your kitties)

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2005-11-01 12:03 PM


I really enjoyed this, Michelle!  Reminded me of raking up piles of autumn leaves and then jumping in them.....good memories!   ........jo
Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2005-11-01 01:30 PM


ohhh, I love the Pink...the dark side
and if you have time to spare
please kick some leaves for me today

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
5 posted 2005-11-01 05:04 PM


could use a little leaf kickin up today...one of those days..
ice
Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
6 posted 2005-11-02 06:15 AM


Fairies adrift, bright
Colors falling down, as leaves
Old thoughts rising up

Memories-forget-me-nots
Gathered from the moons dark side


I think I might have "Brain Damage"

"I can't think of anything to say except...
I think it's marvelous! HaHaHa!"

-----------ice
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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

7 posted 2005-11-02 08:53 AM


very much enjoyed the carefree feeling of this...and this

dont come to seek wisdom
in the write of these dots
can't figure out life
rather gather forget me nots

liked very much the non-concerned desire to simply let go of mind clogs and open everything up to the senses, allowing life to come in...

enjoyed this morning read

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
8 posted 2005-11-02 09:09 AM


OMG Michele...this is wonderful!
So uplifting and we have the perfect weather
for kicking up some leaves today.
I'm headed outside!!!!
Hugs YOU!

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

bklynboy
Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660
florida
9 posted 2005-11-03 06:28 AM


reminds me of good times in upstate NY....good job!
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
10 posted 2005-11-04 07:36 AM


thanks for kickin with me for a spin

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