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0 posted 2005-12-19 10:51 PM



With a Nod To Homer or, Ballad To My Siren

Your song does call me as a Siren’s does a sailor,
But unlike Odysseus I have not a mast to fasten to,
Nor men to bind me; only my own will to contend.
My muscles tensed, every sinew strained
As I steel myself to keep you away.

Stay away, come not near; it is your eyes I fear.
Sing not that song I long to hear,
Lest I lose my life so dear.

Perhaps Calypso is better your like;
Your manner of enchanting is nigh to her’s,
But you differ in spirit and body;
Your charms need no supernatural assistance.
And you intend not love but malice.

Stay away, come not near; it is your eyes I fear.
Sing not that song I long to hear,
Lest I lose my life so dear.

You smile so sweetly but behind I know,
Lives ought but an evil glow.
So perfect a picture do you paint
Silhouetted against a summer sky;
If I go not I feel I shall die.

Stay away, come not near; it is your eyes I fear.
Sing not that song I long to hear,
Lest I lose my life so dear.

As Merlin’s Vivien a sorceress you are,
Young and fresh as spring’s morn‘,
But full of cunning as a midsummer night’s dream.
In all you are more powerful,
For you need no ring to command my thoughts.

Stay away, come not near; it is your eyes I fear.
Sing not that song I long to hear,
Lest I lose my life so dear.

In comparing thee to the first fruit I am not wrong,
You are more perfect in ripeness and flavor.
But your flesh is full of worms
That would infect my soul.
Fie! Fie! Away; I will have none with your disease.

Stay away, come not near; it is your eyes I fear.
Sing not that song I long to hear,
Lest I lose my life so dear.

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c'mon guys you all know a woman like this...

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1 posted 2005-12-19 11:41 PM


Zaheer~
I wish I could tell you 'why' I liked it ...
but, I don't know why I liked it ...
I only know that I did~

The cadence ?  The repetive verse ?
I don't know ... but it must have all worked well together for me~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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2 posted 2005-12-19 11:57 PM


LOL, methinks
you don't stand a chance
better put your life vest on

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